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【参考范文】 How toBeat the Computer Game Addiction Nowadays, many young people like computer games. Some of themare even addicted to playing the games. It’s not good for our health to playcomputer games too much, especially for our eyes. Besides, when we are addictedto playing online games, we are wasting our valuable time. What’s more, it canmake us irritable, which is not conducive to the formation of a good familyatmosphere. But how can we get rid of it? Here are some suggestions. Firstof all, we should shorten our online time and take part in some healthyactivities which can help us relax. In addition, we can develop other hobbiessuch as reading books and listening to music. Finally, we should spend moretime with our family instead of playing computer games. All in all, getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthylife do help young people to enjoy more. 【解析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“如何戒除电脑游戏瘾”为题写一篇文章，重在分析沉迷电脑游戏的危害以及防止沉迷电脑游戏的建议。根据题目要求，需将材料中列出的“危害”全部展示，在“建议”中至少选择三项。 2.写作指导：本文的主题是：如何防止沉迷电脑游戏；本文应以第一人称、一般现在时为主，阐述电脑游戏的危害以及针对性建议；写作时要注意分段叙述，层次要清晰合理，可使用Firstof all、Finally等列举内容，使得文章脉络清晰；此外还要注意要点齐全，语句表达顺畅，使读者一目了然。 (责任编辑：admin) |