2014中考：写好英语作文的10个简单原则(2)
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示例： - The only possible option in order to accelerate the growth of the food industry is to focus on the fact that the target market of this business demands convenience， competence and cost-effectiveness. -要想加快食品行业的发展，最可能的方式是聚焦于目标市场对便利性、管辖权和成本效益的要求上。 - Better: The food industry can grow faster if food trucks focus on convenience， competence and cost-effectiveness. -更好的写法：如果食品交易聚焦于便利性、管辖权和成本效益，那么食品行业会发展得更快。 3. Active, rather than passive. 主动，而不是被动 示例： - The offering price was established by the real estate vendor and the negotiation process was initiated by the real estate buyer. -定价是由房地产商决定的，协商过程是由购房者发起的。 - Better: The real estate vendor set the offering price， and the real estate buyer started negotiating. 更好的写法：房地产商定价，购房者展开协商。 |