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【参考范文】 DearBob, I’m sorry to hear that youare always nervous about tests. Here is some advice for you. First of all, study hardand make good preparations for exams. Second, why not go out for a walk or dosome outdoor exercise before an exam? By doing this, you can relax yourself.Besides, enough sleep will make you full of energy and do well in the exams. Acup of milk before going to bed might help you have a good sleep and listeningto the light music is also a good way. I hope you will find theseways useful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析：本文的写作重在理清楚文章所写的逻辑结构，首先说明对考试要有充分的准备make good preparations for exams，其次，多出去做一些户外的运动或是散步go out for a walk，然后，要保证好足够多的睡眠，注意饮食。在写作上要注意使用表示层次关系的词来增强文章的条理性，如first of all,second,besides等。 【点评】 本文的写作比较好写，写作过程中注意使用表建议的常用话语如：why not,you’d better,what about等，来表达所需提的建议。初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。 (责任编辑：admin) |