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【参考范文】 DearCindy, Don’t worry about yourstudy too much. First, you should learn to relax yourself, I think takingexercise and listening to music can help you. Next, you’d better have a healthyeating habit, you can never go to school without eating breakfast. Then, it’sbest to go to bed early and get up early, enough sleep can help you studybetter. At last, why not try to communicate with others who really care aboutyou? I believe you will feel better after you talk to them. I hope you can go to agood high school, good luck! Yours, Linda 【解析】 1.题干解读：这是一篇“提示性”材料作文。题目要求考生根据所提供的文字材料或具体内容完成作文。因此，在写作过程中，应根据提示的要点，运用恰当的句型、句式，将提示的内容完整表达。 2.例文点评：文章覆盖所有内容要点，拓展合理，行文流畅，条理清晰，句式丰富，可读性强。 3.高分亮点： 短语： worryabout，taking exercise，listening to music 句型： Next,you’d better... you can never go to school without eating breakfast. Atlast, why not try to communicate with others who really care about you? Then,it’s best to go to bed early and get up early, (责任编辑：admin) |