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【参考范文】 Howto help Wang Tao Wang Taospent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a goodfriend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s veryimportant for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time onhis study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playingcomputer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So hemust give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he willbecome more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him toconcentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him withall his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find muchfun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachersto help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文。王涛沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，要求写一篇短文来说明你你打算怎么帮他。本文时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要是第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意上下文要联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。为了使行文流畅、上下文衔接自然，写作时要灵活运用连接词或过渡语言，使文章有一定的连贯性。要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 (责任编辑：admin) |