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【参考范文】 DearMike, You spent too much timeplaying computer games recently and fell behind others in study. As your goodfriend, I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, spending too much time onplaying computer games is very bad for our eyes. To protect our eyes, we’d bettergive it up. Second, you can do exercise and play sports with your friends afterschool and it is good for our health. Finally, you should spend more time onyour study and I will help you catch up with others. 【解析】 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文。根据提示主要从三方面给出建议：一，沉迷电脑游戏对身体的影响；二，多运动；三，把时间花费到学习上。 【点评】短文内容完整，分三个方面提出建议，主要用一般现在时，提出建议的句式丰富多变。 【高分亮点】 短语：too much time，spend…doingsth; fell behind others; I’d like to;be bad for;be good for;catch up with 句型：提建议的句式：had better dosth; you should do；you can do sth。 (责任编辑：admin) |