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【参考范文】 Todaymore and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，Myfriend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time inchatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his familyand friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobilephones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone atthat moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly. In my opinion, I think we can’t usethe mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day.Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, notour whole life. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 (责任编辑：admin) |