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【参考范文】 DearPeter， Don't worry about yourstudy too much.First，you should learn how to relax yourself.I thinkdoing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good wayto relax.And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits.Pleaseremember to have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to studyfor the whole morning.You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep.Itwill keep you active during the day.Finally I think you should talk with yourfriends，parents or teachers often.Tell them about your thoughts andfeelings.Try to get help from them. I hope you can stay in good spirits，andstudy better. Yours Li Ming 【解析】 试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listeningto music is also a good way to relax.等，Finally等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 (责任编辑：admin) |