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假如你是Kate，今天发生了一些不开心的事，请你根据提示以“An unlucky day”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。 要点：1.因为闹钟没有响，早上起床晚了; 2.没赶上校车，不得不步行去上学; 3.到校后，老师让交家庭作业时，才发现作业落在了家里; 4.文章结尾进行总结：糟糕的一天。 An unlucky day ... 参考范文 An unlucky day I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off. When I woke up, it was 7：10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,the school bus had already gone. I missed it. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got to school, it was already 9：10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was! 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份，用第一人称的方式讲述不开心的一天;讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时;书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。 2.例文点评：本例文按时间顺序got up late this morning…7：10….By the time I got there，…when I got to school…When the teacher asked for my homework讲述今天发生过不愉快的事情，文字表达清楚，内容完整连贯。 3.高分亮点：短语：get up late;wash my face quickly ;run to the bus stop without breakfast;be late for class.;ask for;leave it at home 句型：原因状语从句I got up late this morning because my alarm clock didn't go off.; 时间状语从句By the time I got there, the school bus had already gone; 宾语从句When the teacher asked for my homework, I found I had left it at home; 感叹句What a bad day it was! 【点睛】本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真他阅读题干，了解题干的要求，叙述发生过的事情用一般过去式时;书写时要围绕题干提示的要点，按时间顺序、有条理地讲述自己不幸的一天。 (责任编辑：admin) |